Wednesday 3 July 2013

Maddy's tale - part 1





6 comments:

  1. Nice captions. Better you careful if you get too friendly with the boys ; then my might wind up PREGNANT ! Which lasts for 9 months until delivery and about 21 years afterwards. Better to listen to Mom and do your "Girl-Time ". Then again maybe the pills Mom gives you keep you safe from becoming a Mommy yourself.
    Tripped across your website on tgcaptionsandcomics by accident , but very nice to find. More please in this series ?
    Ftygrl

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  2. Glad you like it. And let me reassure you, this series will continue next week, and possibly the week after that too.
    In the meantime, however, why not check out the other captions here, and my stories on fictionmania:
    http://fictionmania.tv/searchdisplay/authordisplay.html?word=3769

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  3. Great caption series so far, Rachel! I can't wait to see where it goes. It seems our protagonist might have a side of herself even she wasn't aware of until now!

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  4. Hm... somehow I think this might become more interesting than the average "gets to like being a girl" story. Especially since mommy seems to value the humiliation aspect. How does she get away with it anyway? Stupid teenage behavior isn't cured by sex-changes. Hell, all the druggies in my class were girls.

    I hope mom will have to pay a price for this.

    I'm curious, do you have any new fm-stories in the pipeline. I rather liked your style.

    Thanks for all your interesting captions,
    Beyogi

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  5. Glad you both enjoy it, and I hope you like the conclusion.
    You're right, of course, feminisation as punishment as behaviour correction would almost certainly not work and would have significant ethical issues. But nonetheless, for some complex reason or other, it seems to be a core part of the TG psyche. I guess it's just one of the tropes of the genre you just need to accept, like the way nobody notices how Superman looks a lot like Clark Kent.
    As for new FM stories? Well... I wrote one, got burgled and my laptop went - along with the story. Rewrote it, got burgled again (ditto). Started rewriting it, and had a major computer fail (though I had a backup this time). So... it's in the pipeline, but I've got so much other stuff on at the moment that it may take some time...

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  6. This was really great! A wonderful read!!!

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