The intended double-page advertising supplement was intended to incorporate an overview of the facilities on one page and a client's account of their stay on the second. This doesn't appear to have come across properly. We also note the appearance of a typographical error on the second page. We regret this lapse in our normally high standards of excellence and as a result have terminated our relationship with the advertising agency immediately. Oakwell Manor would like to apologise to Ms. Lake and any other guests who may have been confused by the advertising materials. We would like to extend our heartiest apologies to Ms. Lake, and would like to offer her a complementary two-day mini-break at Oakwell Manor as a gesture of goodwill.
LOL! What fun, Rachel. Thank you. Your caps are the best. I appreciate the entertainment of the great sequences of lovely images, your sense of humor and clever, spot-on captions. Now, as for the wonderful offer of a free, two-day mini-break, I hope I will have the chance to meet you there. All the best, love. Sincerely, Clare
NICE! This seems a bit different format for you, first the ad and then the happy client. Fun...
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Dear Ms. Lake,
DeleteThe intended double-page advertising supplement was intended to incorporate an overview of the facilities on one page and a client's account of their stay on the second. This doesn't appear to have come across properly. We also note the appearance of a typographical error on the second page. We regret this lapse in our normally high standards of excellence and as a result have terminated our relationship with the advertising agency immediately.
Oakwell Manor would like to apologise to Ms. Lake and any other guests who may have been confused by the advertising materials. We would like to extend our heartiest apologies to Ms. Lake, and would like to offer her a complementary two-day mini-break at Oakwell Manor as a gesture of goodwill.
Best Wishes,
Teresa Holland, Manager and CEO, Oakwell Manor
LOL! What fun, Rachel. Thank you. Your caps are the best. I appreciate the entertainment of the great sequences of lovely images, your sense of humor and clever, spot-on captions.
DeleteNow, as for the wonderful offer of a free, two-day mini-break, I hope I will have the chance to meet you there. All the best, love.
Sincerely,
Clare
Thank you. You're very kind. See you at Oakwell!
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