Thank you very much! I try to get at the emotional core of the story and make that as realistic as possible, even if the actual circumstances are magical. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Too bad it didn't work on Bryan even once. I can imagine that knowing what "Wendy" was feeling would have helped Bryan keep his best friend stay close after the necklace had done its work.
I can also imagine a girlfriend who I would have wished had gotten a hold of such a trinket to use on me! So, does the necklace have any magic left in it? And, where is it?!
Elle, I suspect the necklace has an agenda of it's own, and should not be trusted. I'm sure it has plenty of magick left in it, and will find it's way to a new owner when it sees fit. Glad you enjoyed the story!
I love your dialogs. They seem so real, like how onee might actually feel if taken over by the magic. Cool!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! I try to get at the emotional core of the story and make that as realistic as possible, even if the actual circumstances are magical. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteToo bad it didn't work on Bryan even once. I can imagine that knowing what "Wendy" was feeling would have helped Bryan keep his best friend stay close after the necklace had done its work.
ReplyDeleteI can also imagine a girlfriend who I would have wished had gotten a hold of such a trinket to use on me!
So, does the necklace have any magic left in it? And, where is it?!
Nice story, Rachel!
Peace,Love&Kisses;
Elle
Elle, I suspect the necklace has an agenda of it's own, and should not be trusted. I'm sure it has plenty of magick left in it, and will find it's way to a new owner when it sees fit.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the story!